The reading
for Lamott discusses the building of character, plot and dialogue in an
interesting fashion. The first part of the reading starts off with Polaroids. This section indicates that
"writing a first draft is very much like watching a Polaroid develop."
To paraphrase what Lamott is saying, we write and don't always know the whole
picture until is fully developed. I
suppose that is true in a way. I sometimes write little stories in my spare
time, and I typically have some sort of outline as to how I want the story line
to flow but I don't always know what I want to put in the middle for details.
He continues in describing that as the polaroid develops, you will see more of
what wasn't initially seen. Writing is similar to this concept. You can write
your first draft and you see what the full picture could be. You then go back
and add and edit to create a full depiction of what you are trying to tell.
The next section of the reading is Character. One part that caught my
attention was when Lamott mentioned that he asked Ethan Canin to tell him what the most
valuable think he knew about writing. Canin's response was, " Nothing is
as important as a likable narrator. Nothing holds a story together
better." I agree to some extent. I think most writers write to have the
main character liked by most readers. But if the story line is crappy, well you
can lose interest real quickly if the author doesn't keep the account moving
along.
The next
portion is Plot. A section that
really was so truthful was a statement by Carolyn Chute. " I feel like a
lot of the time my writing is like having about twenty boxes of Christmas
decoration. But no tree. Your going, Where do I put this? Then they go, Okay,
you can have a tree, but we'll blindfold you and you gotta cut it down with a
spoon." Lamott says that a lot of their writings start in this
fashion. I can see where a lot of
writers would feel this way. I have a few novels that I work on in my spare time,
and I have all of these notes of what I want to happen and in some form of an
order, but I can't seem to connect the ideas right away.
The final section by Lamott is Dialogue. The most that I got out of
this section is that we are supposed to not let your writing sound too uptight.
He explains how some of his student's will read a section of their writing and
then will be surprised because "the dialogue looked Okay on paper, yet now
it sounds as if it were poorly translated from their native Hindi." I
think that good writing usually comes when the writer fully describes the scene
occurring. When the reader can fully imagine the scene being illustrated he/she
can understand the dialogue much more.
Great, maybe include some discussion of the fiction stories.
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